Comic War Part 4
TL;DRPosted Thu, 08/27/2009 by Dave in response to Comic War Part 4
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This is perhaps my greatest failure as a writer.
We were looking for a way to transition out of the arc. Joe may have been deep in the trenches of the Architecture School at the time, I can’t really recall. But somehow we agreed on this abomination, which violates in spades my rule for text (25 words per bubble, maximum–and that was pushing it for the attention span of the Cav Daily audience).
In my defense, I do like the punchline, though it’s kind of botched by the weird placement of our text boxes.
I often dream fearful, papery dreams of my own destruction.
… Toilet!